here is what i had to say in my email sending the song over after some work:
'' I like this song a lot and think it has a lot of good things going on in it,, i like the faded level of the vocals not taking over too much, maybe the guitar is a tiny bit too high , and the bass not quite clear enough,, but overall its understandable and good.. i have adjusted the eq's a bit and filled in the guitar part with another secondary distorted electric cos i think i sounded slightly out of rythm in some places, so the other part will accompany the lead and iron out the wonky stuff i was playing on my broken stringed guitar, great! ''
heres some possible lyrics to this one:
SWEET DREAM PIE
I looked high on the riverboat
rivers rise up
had to let me down but
you would'nt let me
high on the rythm
that rythm's never done
9 9 9 9 9
Don't let me wind, unwind
I'm just satisfied
Leave my leopards fine
Why why why
did you let us, let us
just leave my drivers and I
why why why
opposite
why why why
why why why
babysit
why why why
LEAD BIT IN BETWEEN -----------------------
Dinnerplate, Dinnerplate
I don't do nothing but
laugh and overtime
Tea high
dinner fly
let's just settle by
lie lie lie lie lie lie lie lie
lie lie lie
lie lie lullaby
lie lie lie
lie lie lullaby
lie lie lie
lie lie lullaby
oooh
BIT OF A GUITAR SOLO-----------------------
lullaby
lullaby
lullaby
-Chris

Very! cool pic mate. Good find!
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