more dan riffs and crunchy bees

yep , some more to look over, here is what we have:

0331 - interesting sorts of things here, i like the rhythm guitar idea.. why not start with something like this and slowly add different elements, some cool chordage going on and wobbly notes i like those, ur obviously experimenting around here quite a lot


0334 -  quite a definite rock start riff, then a change of key , i like the way the guitar sounds after you have changed key here, can really appreciate the way that amp sounds when it does its thing!  its a very basic idea, but of course with the potential to be anything it wants

0335 - yes similar to the previous one, like an extention to the chord change idea and general structure.  its slow and plodding , sort of reminds me of jurassic park or mammoths for some reason. dark growling, slow. and steady, quite an interesting change where it goes into a droning note with occasional breaks which really lift the drone out and make it more interesting, good! it reminds me of some song, but i can't think what right now

(tired old blues) - like it, straight away i am getting something of a light and colourful riff,  maybe not quite tired or old, which is kind of interesting considering your choice of title!  i like the little variations you keep trying, it helps to vary things and see later on a more careful listen to what and how it affects the tune, great one!

check out! this sounds kind of tired and old :::

(tired old blues with OverDrive), yes , it jumps out more doesnt it?  just has more of an abrasive quality.  its once a again a great starting point for something to tie into, lets try a few things out!